Sample Essay for SSC CGL Descriptive Paper -Women Empowerment

By Shekher Rajput|Updated : March 7th, 2017

We have chosen a very sensitive topic for today, ‘Women Empowerment’ so that you have an idea about how to frame the content for similar topics. We have already discussed the format of Essay and have shared a sample(Misuses of the Saviour-The Internet) with you last week. 

Stick to the format of the essay as discussed earlier,

An essay should be divided into three paragraphs:

  • Introduction (around 40 words)
  • Body (around 160 words)
  • Conclusion (around 50 words)

For a better understanding, it is recommended that you open the earlier articles while reading this one.

French fashion designer Coco Chanel quoted, ‘A girl should be two things: who and what she wants’. While ‘empower’ means ‘to authorise’, women empowerment takes with it a broader approach of making women be at par with men at all levels.

The fact that Indian women have always stood up high and proved time and again that they are no less than men in the country cannot be denied. They have proved themselves to be the pillar of a strong standing stable environment. A woman has the power to build, nurture and transform. Crime against women has always been prevailing, it is just that the media has unveiled it now at a bigger scale. To take women empowerment into the real-world context, we need to begin with eradicating male chauvinism. It is the combined effort of both the genders which can bring about a change. We need to develop a sense of respect for each other which should ideally be a part of a good upbringing. Indian women are no longer prisoned in the four walls of the house rather they have stepped out and been great leaders. It is the awareness about their rights and the urge inside them which has caused this change.

The need is to set our minds open and work towards a future where both men and women work together, have equal rights and respect each other. Create an environment such that the women are not scared of those staring eyes all around them but brave enough to stare back again.

Important things to keep in mind:

  1. As discussed, the above sample has been divide into three paragraphs per the expected word count.
  2. First paragraph- Highlight the argument, begin with related quotes or stats

Second paragraph- Examples supporting argument, transitional words

Third paragraph- Persuasive conclusion

  1. Vocabulary of varying complexity to be used.
  2. Always draft a rough sketch of the points you wish to write so that you make a proper sequence and do not miss out on any important information.
  3. Read a lot so that you have sufficient stuff to write.
  4. For a sensitive topic like this, be mindful of the words you use.
  5. Since this topic is very vast in its context, do not go into details for such topics. It is advisable that you describe the issue in general terms.
  6. Do not express views which may hurt the reader.

 We are providing you content just for reference. You can always add your own information and make your content unique. A little increase or decrease in the word limit from our side will solely be for providing you more and more alternative styles of writing.

Hope this helps. Stay tuned for more samples.


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